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| | Echo in the Night (WIP) | |
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Echo Member
Posts : 3 Join date : 2015-09-23
| Subject: Echo in the Night (WIP) Wed Sep 23, 2015 10:57 pm | |
| Character Name: Echo Age: 3 Species: Mackenzie Valley Wolf Gender:FemaleDesired Rank: Guardian Female (if possible, since it's open) Character Looks:Echo is a silvery gray wolf, with a large size because of her breed. Being the largest of the wolf species, Echo stands at 36 in (91 cm) at the shoulder, and from the tip of her nose to the end of her tail, she's around 73 in (185 cm). She weighs in at 139 lbs, pure strength and muscle. Her body is lean yet powerful, with long legs that sometimes allow her to go 40 mph for short periods of time. She has heavily equipped jaws that can crush and wound, and strength that many don't possess. Her eyes are a bright blue with flecks of silver and gold, and a dark outline around the iris. Her face is slim and defined, and her body takes the same shape. Pictures:History:(Be as detailed as you can. Must be 3 paragraphs long or more.) Theme Song:"What Hurts the Most" - Rascal Flatts How did you find us?:Existing Member Joining Key: A grumpy tiger came and stole the joining keys- Myth
Last edited by Echo on Fri Sep 25, 2015 4:50 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
| | | Beta Banshee Moderator
Posts : 18 Join date : 2015-09-15 Age : 29 Location : My Inner Imagination
Character Information Age: 4 Years Gender: Female Species: Arctic Wolf
| Subject: Re: Echo in the Night (WIP) Thu Sep 24, 2015 10:07 am | |
| Just a few things! ^^
First off, I would suggest not having your character be only one years old. She would be to young to be apart of any rank in the pack, and would be considered an omega or pup.
Second, Beta female has been taken(by Banshee - me), the rank was updated today.
By changing your age, your description of her would make more sense. A pup can not crush and wound anything because they are still growing.
Make her older, and add a little more to your description about her. Talk more about the way she looks.
When it comes to history, after changing your age, talk about how it was growing up. Make these changes, and you should be good to go. | |
| | | Echo Member
Posts : 3 Join date : 2015-09-23
| Subject: Re: Echo in the Night (WIP) Fri Sep 25, 2015 4:51 pm | |
| Sorry about that, the age was a typo. Still working on the history though, should have it up by the end of the day. | |
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